Touching Evil: A Review
by Alina Jackson
Touching Evil tells the tale of Maggie Barnes, a telepathic
police sketch artist that is determined to stop the evil that is terrorizing the
streets of Seattle. Knowing that it will be her personal
responsibility to stop this madness, Maggie puts herself in life threatening
situations. With no clues or description of the perpetrator she
must rely on her own special talents and the information a blinded victim can
recall. While pursuing the mad man she meets John
Garrett, a self-assured successful business man, who finds it hard to believe in
Maggie’s talents but begins to fall deeply in love with her. As
time progresses John becomes more convinced that Maggie is in serious
danger. Since no new leads develop, John, with the
help of the lead investigator, convince the Chief of Police to call in the
little known special unit of the FBI to help end this terror. Can
this psychopath be caught before the evil touches more of Seattle’s young women
and destroys the woman he loves?
The opening prologue grabbed me from the first sentence but
as the chapters continued I found it harder to get excited about the story. I
kept turning the pages but I think that was due more to my determination than
the thrill of the story. The characters in the story were flat. The
supporting characters lacked depth to the point that I often forgot who they
were and why they were there, making it necessary to go back a few pages to
refresh my memory. John Garrett, the love interest, seemed nice
enough but I wanted to fall in love with him. I knew little about
his personality except that he didn’t believe that it was possible to possess
any of the paranormal talents described in the story. I would have
liked to know where he came from and what drove him to be successful.
John and Maggie’s relationship could have used a more in-depth
description. What about John did Maggie love? What
about Maggie, other than her talents, did John love, hate, or fear?
Also, Maggie’s brother Beau added little to the story and didn’t show a
side of Maggie that made her seem more real. I was puzzled why he
was even mentioned. Then the villain came out of no-where.
It felt as though it was an afterthought where the author had to find a
way to end the tale. All I could think about was if John was a
powerful and smart business man then why didn’t he see anything unusual when his
sister became a widow? The story ended with too many questions
left unanswered.
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